Max good adverbs Mrs Ritchie and I like your last sentence.
I'm not too sure about your adverb in the second line because I don't think a dinosaur would be happy until it caught its prey.Maybe you should have used 'sneakily' or 'cautiously'. What's a better verb than 'walk'?
Max good adverbs Mrs Ritchie and I like your last sentence.
ReplyDeleteI'm not too sure about your adverb in the second line because I don't think a dinosaur would be happy until it caught its prey.Maybe you should have used 'sneakily' or 'cautiously'. What's a better verb than 'walk'?
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