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Friday, 21 August 2015

adverb camo

Summer
Sizzle sizzle. Slowly I ate my sausage sizzle while my brother ate his pizza. Wahoo! We were going fishing after that. Swish the fish came flying through the air like a race car. Suddenly my rod starting to bend. I pulled my rod slowly and started to wind. Finally I pulled it in the boat. It was a snapper Luckily it was almost home time because I was starting to feel sea sick.

1 comment:

  1. Good story Max. Perfect time to catch your fish just before home time. I enjoyed your writing, it helped make the story really interesting.

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