Learning Journey

Wednesday, 30 August 2017

Abandoned Hospital

The Abandoned Hospital

Through the old wooden door, beds with burnt holes and smelly blankets lay in a row. The floor was as cold as ice on your feet and smelt like ash. Ripped curtains falling off their rails and cupboards were knocked over. Smashed glass sprinkled the dusty floor and bed legs were bending. The walls were scratched and burnt. Spiders on the roof created webs and cockroaches were on the floor crawling with their tiny little legs. A spider dropped from a web and fell on my hoodie. I freaked out. I landed on a bed, the blankets were still warm.


4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Max,

    Wow - great descriptive writing! That last sentence makes me want to know more! Will you add any more to this story?

    Miss M

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  2. Kia ora Max,
    I like your writing you did on that spooky picture!!

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