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Friday, 19 May 2017

Writing term 2 week 3 2017

Kia Ora

This week we have been doing similes and metaphors. We had to write about a little snippet of a moment in time. Here is my recount.



2 comments:

  1. Great job on the similes and metaphors, Max. You might like to check your punctuation when you have some spare time. Your dad has a busy life.

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    1. Yeah he does have a busy life.

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