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Friday, 3 March 2017

Week 5 term 1 Writing

Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning to write a myth or legend.
Something I think I have done well  is The three Reasons but
next time I think I could improve by putting more words in my sentences.
Ka kite ano 






Pleading a Cause - Persuasive Writing       

Pretend you are the King of Athens.  Write a letter to King Minos, pleading for the lives of the youths who are to be fed to the Minotaur.
Give at least 3 reasons why their lives should be spared.
Remember to write a conclusion at the end to link your reasons together.



Dear King Minos,
I am writing to you about the fate of the nine doomed youths.  I plead for their release on the grounds that:

Firstly, none of those young men have done anything wrong. It would be unfair to kill them.

Secondly,these boys might grow up to be mighty warriors one day. If you kill them now, they will never be able to help you defend your city.

Finally, killing these boys will not bring your boy, the prince back from the dead. They will be dead too and you will still not feel any better.


I am sure you will must agree, those innocent boys deserve to stay alive, become useful men and their deaths will not heal your grieving heart.


Yours faithfully,
King of Athens                                                                    


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