Learning Journey

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Fish bone writing 2016

Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese. I decided to put a photo of my animal on the background of my fishbone diagram and publish it just like that.
Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.
Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano

5 comments:

  1. Hi Max, I like the fact it was a good one. I did not no that a red panda ate Bamboo, berries, blossoms and bird eggs. From Sam from Ohaeawai School, blog you later

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  2. Hi Max, red pandas are cool, thanks for the blog.

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  3. Hi Liam here from Awahono School. I like how you put the Red Panda in the background. Maybe next time you do this you can write in a different color. If you want you can click on my name and look at my blog.
    Liam

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  4. Hi my name is Adam from Awahono School. I like your photograph and you could maybe change the colour of your font next time. You also did a really good introduction. Wow, I've never seen a red panda!!

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  5. hi my name is isabella i am a year 4 room 3 class and from waima school i really like what you'v doe its really cool if you would like to see my learning my blog is http://www.wsisabellaw.blogspot.co.nz

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