Making a skeleton

KIa ora After we made our writing skeleton on the planning sheet, we had to highlight all the notes and then copy and paste them below in a list one after the other. So, our story skeleton looks like it can stand up now but it is still just bones. Our teacher says writers call this an outline. We read our outlines out loud to each other and they sound good.Here is mine below.

30 March 2016

Easter

Yay it’s easter i shouted.

At easter weekend.

My cosines my grandparents and my aunty and uncle and my Brother.

At the beach house.

A easter egg hunt played games and ate chocolate.

We had a easter egg hunt.

They were soft and delicious.

We watched a easter movie.

They were lots of fun.

I went to bed.

I felt happy.